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What are you writing?

Novels
Short Stories
Writing for children
Poetry
Plays

Decide how many critiques you’d like - see Costs

Then access the submission form from the pages above, from How to Submit or from here.

Once you’ve completed the form, click on submit. You’re then asked to attach your work. Easy!

We then send you an electronic invoice, usually within 24 hours. You pay securely by credit or debit card, or by PayPal. If you’d rather post a cheque, that’s fine. The form gives you this opportunity.

We aim to return reviews of work under 15,000 words within 3 weeks.

If you’d rather submit your work by post, please see postal submissions.

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"Thanks very much. I am very impressed! Your reviewer has done a very thorough job, helping and not depressing me. I will take on board her/his advice.
Will be back for more!" ~ MT

Our service

We are passionate reviewers with a clear understanding of what makes good fiction and how to provide useful feedback. We read your work and appraise it objectively – unlike family and friends.

High professional standards are at the heart of our written critiques. Almost all our reviewers have backgrounds in the worlds of publishing, education or professional writing.

What we offer
• objective opinion, based only on your writing and not on anything else about you;
• considered critiques, which you might want to quote in your submission to a publisher or agent;
• up to 4 critiques, each by a different reviewer, for greater feedback;
• a checklist rating, which should help you in assessing and developing your writing;
• affordable prices.

What we don't offer
• we have no formal links to publishers of fiction or literary agents and so we can’t recommend work to them;
• we can’t guarantee your work will be published, no matter how much we think it might deserve to be;
• an editing service included with the critiques – however, we do provide basic copy editing together with expert proof-reading for spelling and grammatical errors as a separate service. See Proofing and Editing.

Critiques are usually between one and two A4 pages, single-spaced. They will look at elements such as characterisation, plot development, style, credibility, structure and the writing itself. You choose if you want one, two, three or four reviews.

Accompanying each review will be a checklist, rating elements of your writing, usually on a scale of 1-5, where 1 = needs more work, and 5 = excellent. For examples, please see Sample Critique. We provide slightly different, tailored checklists for writing aimed at the children’s market, and for full novels.

Please remember every critique is subjective. This reflects real life, where one reader might hugely enjoy a book that someone else dislikes – this applies to agents and publishers too!