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Feedback was proud to judge the national short
story competition held by Chorley & District
Writers’ Circle. Congratulations to winners
Clare Marsh, Helen Anderton and Rosie Seymour for
their stories on the them ‘Your Sins Will
Find You Out’. The three stories are included
in Aware, the annual collection of the Circle’s
Enjoy the read.
Congratulations to Laurence Cooper on
the publication of his comedy-romp-political-satire George
Valentine’s Retirement Plan. It was a
great pleasure to work on editing this novel and it deserves
huge success. If you enjoy something a bit wacky, with
amazing, well-drawn characters and a story that has you
gasping as you ride as a twisty rollercoaster, then this
is for you. Set in modern-day England and with themes
of music, politics, PR and criminal activities by a lovable
pair of old rogues as well as Russian oligarchs and Bulgarian
assassins, this will have you smiling at every page and
desperate for more. Available
in print or as an ebook.
Congratulations to Austin Hernon who
has published his historical odyssey The Wayward
Prince as an ebook through Matador. We have
helped Austin with The Wayward Prince over a long time
and it’s tremendously exciting to see the work
finally come to fruition. The prince of the story is
Robert Curthose, Duke of Normandy, the eldest son of
William the Conqueror. He never became king of England – but
he did lead a fascinating life; on the battlefield,
in political shenanigans throughout continental Europe,
England and Scotland, and with a number of feisty ladies
between the sheets. Meticulously researched, it reveals
a man history has tried to gloss over ever since William
Rufus took the English crownn. read
Good news too for Fiction Feedback customer David
Rashleigh. His thriller Mindblower is
now published on Amazon as an ebook.
provides editing to Open Circle Publishing and we’ve
been delighted to edit two amazing thrillers, Due Diligence and
Proceeds of Crime by talented writer DJ
Harrison. read more>
iNation by James McAllister
An exciting and intriguing premise about how modern day technology in the hands
of innovative people could revolutionise the world as we know it. And we
mean revolutionise! This book is available for Kindle.
Where the Truth Lies by Margaret
A collection of short stories to entertain, amuse,
outrage – and make
you think. We love it. Matador Fiction. This book is available for
Kindle and as a printed hardback.
The Confessions of Becky Sharp by David
A prequel and sequel to Thackeray’s famous
Vanity Fair. A raunchy and very agreeable read that
will delight any fans of the sexy nineteenth
century adventuress. Pride & Prejudice it ain’t!
Published by Vanguard Press, this book is
available for Kindle and
as a printed paperback.
It Happened in Paris by Molly
The story of Evie, a madcap heroine who finds herself
in charge of a coach tour to Paris. Given that Evie
has great difficulty taking charge of anything,
from credit cards to her
sister’s children, we’re in for a rollercoaster ride…
Published by Sphere (Little, Brown), this book is available for Kindle
and as a printed paperback.
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Trail’ shortlisted for Theakston’s best crime novel 2006. Winner
of the CWA Short Story Dagger 2008.
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